You started very simply,
Nothing flashy, nothing trite.
You said what you're about and nothing more.
You clarified your limits
Your credentials looked all right.
Your point of view I wanted to explore.
Your preview said exactly just where you were going to.
You didn't promise anything you weren't prepared to do.
Your intro caught my interest,
It was a lovely sight,
But what came next just knocked me through the floor.
I love your body.
Your structure is on fire.
Each topic sentence fills me with desire
To keep on reading.
I love your body,
And all your details please.
No unsupported generalities.
I know I shouldn't tell you.
I know you should object.
To say these things, I'm stepping out of line.
But I am full of wonder:
All your spelling is correct.
Your punctuation's just as good as mine.
Your summ'ry held your thesis, but added nothing new.
You ended with your word count, and I knew that we were through.
I can't believe this happened--
I never could expect
Five paragraphs would ever be so fine.
I love your body—
Your feelings all come through.
It's so terrific—you're so specific, too,
In each example.
I love your body.
I love your lively style
From writing as a cam'ra all the while.
I love your body, etc.